Let’s follow the starry shadows to remote galaxies, learning alternate realities spread across galactic meadows, opening new windows : Vandana Sharma
Lovely sentiments :)
I like that repeating line at the end of the two stanzas.
I love how you tie that into nature, the dashes work so good to provide emphasis in breaks.
What a lovely love poem. So simple yet so full of emotion! The punctuation works very well.
Beautiful and uplifting.
Lovely and sweet and I like how you spaced the verses!
Thank you for flying by. I appreciate your honest and critical comments.