03 August 2018

When God Made You My Destiny


Stars-
must have ,
shone brightly!
and
winds-
leapt  overtly!
when god made you my destiny.

Rain-
must have,
danced graciously!
with
flowers-
smiling shyly!
when god made you my destiny.

7 comments:

  1. I like that repeating line at the end of the two stanzas.

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  2. I love how you tie that into nature, the dashes work so good to provide emphasis in breaks.

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  3. What a lovely love poem. So simple yet so full of emotion! The punctuation works very well.

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  4. Lovely and sweet and I like how you spaced the verses!

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