15 July 2018

Daisies : Tricube

    
Yellowish
small daisies
dance and smile

whispering
lullaby
to the sky

a sweet sight
their gentle
pure demure


Tricube : Each line contains three syllables, Each stanza contains three lines, and poem contains three stanzas. 



10 comments:

  1. This is a sweetly phrased as the daisy itself.

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  2. Aw, love that last line especially.

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  3. Gorgeous!!! Especially love the last one 💖💖

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  4. the elegance of the simple, humble daisy! well done :)

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  5. I love daises.. This makes me smile.

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  6. A patch of daisies in the wild. Sooo nice, Vandana. Daisies are Mrs. Jim's favorite flower.
    ..

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  7. This is lovely! Love the middle one.

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  8. I love daises too (and dandelions).
    Anna :o]

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