03 January 2018

Unforgettable Journey of Life


This journey of life

a tale of joy
a tale of sorrow
endlessly lingering
afflatus of tomorrow

This journey of life

a wish fulfilled
a love denied
a friendship instaurated
with promises to abide

This journey of life

silently hides
          invisible blessings
          and prayers inside



13 comments:

  1. Wow, yes, these words live, and Happy New Year to you

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  2. Beautifully meditative writing, Vandana.

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  3. The contrasts and opposites is what make this life... "It was the best of times, I was the worst of times..." as tale of two cities begin.

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  4. your "afflatus" Wow!!! my first New Word for 2018. Thanks for keeping me on my toes

    Happy New Year

    much love...

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  5. Such an emotional dance, the journey of life (and living).

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  6. Beautifully poignant write, Vandana!❤️

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  7. We walk with prayers inside, some answered, some not. Wonderful, Vandada. See you tomorrow, at your feature. Smiles.

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  8. I loved the rhythm and flow of this poem and especially those amazingly beautiful ending words.

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  9. You have captured the journey of life beautifully

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  10. Brilliantly constructed and beautifully rendered.

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  11. Wonderful chain of thought

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  12. I am glad that, whatever else, there are always those invisible blessings – and some visible ones too.

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