16 September 2017

Wild Rose: Rhyming Wave


Flourishing in the spiny bush,
the spiny, spiny, spiny bush-
swaying to melodies of thrush,
swaying to rhythmic breeze.

Snuggling around the tall trees,
the tall, tall, tall trees-
listening to the sounds of bees,
listening to every heartbeat.

Its fragrance fills the air sweet,
the air, air ,air sweet-
a delightful red rosy treat.
a delightful lovely rosy sight.

The sunshine glow kisses it right,
kisses ,kisses, kisses it right-
imparting the golden delight,
imparting the sparkling hues.

Flourishing in the spiny bush,
imparting the sparkling hues.

The Rhyming Wave is a poetry form created by Katharine L. Sparrow, American writer and poet who writes on Allpoetry.com.


10 comments:

  1. OMG...I feel like singing it, dear Vandana :)

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  2. Perfect, your words read as the waves on a stream, just perfect!

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  3. Lovely with those changing lines, that mimic the vine which is the topic of your writing.

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  4. This is absolutely gorgeous!!❤️

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  5. A lovely piece which flows smoothly, I agree with Sumana, your poem feels as though one could sing it.

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  6. The lovely flow of your words brings a delightful scent to the scene.

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  7. A rosy delight! Good one😊

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  8. A rosy delight! Good one😊

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  9. swaying to melodies of thrush,
    swaying to rhythmic breeze

    One can discover such poetic movements in the bush if one cares enough to observe. And you did it Vandana!

    Hank

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  10. A very sweet smelling write!

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