21.10.15

Welcome The Dawn


Night hides away,
as dawn smiles.
Sluggish moon,
saunters away,
towing the stars,
on the way.
Night’s eyes heavy with sleep,
close dreams within.
Sun shines over - above,
a new day begins.

19 comments:

  1. Wonderful descripton of a new day, I congratulate you.
    Yvonne.

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  2. This is a beautiful poem about how the new day begins... I love how the night time is sleepy and dreaming... very good Vandana xox

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  3. Great picture coupled to lovely descriptive poem. What more can I say.

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  4. A beautiful mythology created in poetic form. Lovely!

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  5. A wonderful description. "Sluggish moon, saunters away" - very cool - and turned up the corners of my lips. I love it when a writer takes that little bit of a risk and injects a charming, somewhat playful, line of poetry into their work. Loved this, Vandana!

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  6. This is absolutely exquisite!!❤️

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  7. A lovely slow start to a new day!

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  8. I love all the esses... sounds wonderful to read aloud plus it is lovely.

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  9. I really like the image of the sluggish moon towing the stars.

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  10. A lyrical & enchanting poem to begin the day with. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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  11. luv the way you crafted images to your new day

    much love...

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  12. I like the image of the moon pulling the stars along... wonderful

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  13. A lovely romance of the dawn of the day. Sluggish moon - I love that too.
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

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  14. I felt the birth of a new day... in my bones!

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  15. A delightful way to start a new day!

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  16. Beautiful words of beginning a new day

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