October 21, 2015

Welcome The Dawn


Night hides away,
as dawn smiles.
Sluggish moon,
saunters away,
towing the stars,
on the way.
Night’s eyes heavy with sleep,
close dreams within.
Sun shines over - above,
a new day begins.

19 comments:

  1. Wonderful descripton of a new day, I congratulate you.
    Yvonne.

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  2. This is a beautiful poem about how the new day begins... I love how the night time is sleepy and dreaming... very good Vandana xox

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  3. Great picture coupled to lovely descriptive poem. What more can I say.

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  4. A beautiful mythology created in poetic form. Lovely!

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  5. A wonderful description. "Sluggish moon, saunters away" - very cool - and turned up the corners of my lips. I love it when a writer takes that little bit of a risk and injects a charming, somewhat playful, line of poetry into their work. Loved this, Vandana!

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  6. This is absolutely exquisite!!❤️

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  7. A lovely slow start to a new day!

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  8. I love all the esses... sounds wonderful to read aloud plus it is lovely.

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  9. I really like the image of the sluggish moon towing the stars.

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  10. A lyrical & enchanting poem to begin the day with. Lovely. Thanks for sharing.

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  11. luv the way you crafted images to your new day

    much love...

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  12. I like the image of the moon pulling the stars along... wonderful

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  13. A lovely romance of the dawn of the day. Sluggish moon - I love that too.
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

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  14. I felt the birth of a new day... in my bones!

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  15. A delightful way to start a new day!

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  16. Beautiful words of beginning a new day

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