9.10.15

Night Creatures

As night weaves its web,
around the emotions – lost and gained,
many creatures rise,
to claim their fame.

Day’s light,
shadows their virtues,
drinks their colours,
engulfs their vibes.

But,
night is the time,
for them to rise,
and steal the show,
from day’s light.

6 comments:

  1. Wow... "shadows their virtues, drinks their colours" beeeeeautiful!

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  2. May I congratulate you on an excellent verse, the message came across wonderfully. Well done.
    Yvonne.

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  3. This is really well done ... a wonderful cadence pinned against a finely sketched description of night creatures rising.

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  4. Vandana... the poem is wonderful... it's nice to see a new entry by you, I'm happy you are back xox ♡

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  5. I think many times we find those that are awake at night just a little bit more chilling as they are.. love this one.

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