September 11, 2015

Wait, Wait, Wait Is All I Can Do.......

In dark black nights,
my heart forever cries,
it hurts me more,
to be far from you.

Wait, wait, wait is all I can do,
wait, wait, wait is all I can do.

When swollen skies rain,
I feel their pain,
my tears fall through them,
rolling down time’s hem.

Wait, wait, wait is all I can do,
wait, wait, wait is all I can do.

In my imagination,
you’re always mine.
We sing songs, flowing around,
and you hold my hand,
take me to your land.

But

Wait, wait, wait is all I can do,
wait, wait, wait is all I can do.

In dark black nights,
my heart forever cries,
it hurts me more,
to be far from you.

An attempt at song writing. 


11 comments:

  1. That waiting can be long and agonizing ~ I like the experiment specially the refrain, smiles ~

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  2. That longing.. it can be like a tight rope, a bowstring reaching cross the time and space.. but all we do is wait and wait..

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  3. Excellent read and wonderful words.
    Yvonne.

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  4. It iS a song. Words that flow with a melody.

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  5. Sometimes all one can do is wait!

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  6. This could be a song Vandana :) I love it!

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  7. I'd like to add, I did not read the last line there saying when I commented! So indeed your attempt was successful :)

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  8. "swollen skies" what a fantastic imagery...the yearning is palpable...

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  9. Vandana... the waiting is the hardest... I think it is much to painful, I have stopped waiting... this is very good poem with such beautiful meaning xox

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  10. Patience is not always my best virtue,
    because waiting can be so painful.

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  11. this would be an awesome song! catch a musician :)

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