September 8, 2015

Secret Love : Trinet

Secret love
Her blessing
Like precious pearl in a shell
Hidden in his heart’s deepest core
Priceless treasure
She found
Secret love

For eons
She waited
For his beautiful emotions to flow
To drench her with love’s rain
Her Pacific
Of love
Secret love

The Trinet, created by zion, is a form with these specifications:
Line 1 - 2 words
Line 2 - 2 words
Line 3 - 6 words
Line 4 - 6 words
Line 5 - 2 words
Line 6 - 2 words
Line 7 - 2 words

15 comments:

  1. I like how you used Pacific in this.
    And perhaps the persistence of waiting
    paid off for her in the end.
    Patience, something I am not always good with.

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  2. Lovely words with such beautiful meaning... ♡♡♡

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  3. Speak. Pleez speak. These words are too beautiful to be secret *smiles*

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  4. Waiting for love to be requited and "beautiful emotions to flow" - you have captured that bittersweet yearning exquisitely.

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  5. How beautiful Secret love can truly be a priceless treasure. This poem warmed my soul.

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  6. I like the surprise of Pacific, too. :)

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  7. A message of love in a bottle needs to be filled with the drench of the Pacific and thrown to those who sent it.

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  8. To find something that makes us whole after waiting almost forever... wonderful.

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  9. a beautiful classical kind of longing intoned in this poem, nice form

    much love...

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  10. Like precious pearl in a shell
    Hidden in his heart’s deepest core

    Great lines Vandana! One can well imagine the tightness of secrecy when love is hidden from prying eyes

    Hank

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  11. A lovely form and tribute to the bottled love.

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  12. Ooh, a new form! And a sweet example of it. Thank you.

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  13. Beautiful - Great job with the form.

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