May 23, 2015

Dissolving : Shadorma

Drop by drop,

                             my every part melts,

                             into wisps,

                            coalescing forever,

                            into celestial cosmos,

rolling endlessly.

                                                     Brooke Shaden Photography
Shadorma : Non rhyming poetry form with syllable count as 3/5/3/7/7/5

10 comments:

  1. Interesting to imagine the joining the cosmos as a coalescence--food for thought!

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  2. I especially like the first three lines.

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  3. A very nice feel to this -- :)

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  4. wonderful union...dreamlike...

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  5. Nice notion of 'coalescing forever', dreamy and beautiful fit to art.

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  6. Beautifully written. :)

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  7. This is so very pretty--and your blog too!

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  8. I don't know if my comment got lost: This is a beautiful poem, and blog!

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  9. Such enthralling words Vandana... you always draw me into the center of the emotions xox ♡

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  10. Oh wow this is divine! Exquisitely beautiful love it!

    mindlovemisery

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