25.5.15

Clipped Wings : Fibonacci

Clipped
wings
dashed hopes
fallen dreams
bottled up in gloom
trapped forever in vanished thoughts
drowned in dark tunnel nothing can ever pull her back.
Fibonacci poetry form : A poem having  fibonacci sequence for syllable count per line. That is.
0+1=1
1+1=2
1+2=3
2+3=5
3+5=8
5+8=13
8+13=21
13+21=34

and so on and so forth…

11 comments:

  1. Quite a challenging form... nicely done. I must try it sometime!

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  2. I love this form. It suits the quiet desperation mood of the poem.

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  3. Oh quite an intriguing & difficult form :D you have carried it so beautifully!
    Well penned :D

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  4. Darkly appealing. It stirs my empathy.

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  5. Very sad- feels like an inevitability, great job, Mosk

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  6. i echo colleen's sentiments

    nicely written

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  7. Wonderful form Vandana! It's mathematically inclined and there are a few examples in life of its occurrence!

    Hank

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  8. "bottled up in gloom" That line alone speaks worlds to me. I have had too much gloom lately. Great poem!

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