7.3.15

Water Lilies : Memento

Lilies adore watery floors,
roots embrace underneath.
Tranquil.
Leafy steps to far unseen doors,
tread quietly beneath,
as quill.





White jewels on aqua garment,
looking at the blue sky,
wonder.
Reflection of them so ardent,
soft clouds sprinkle and fly,
under.



Memento, created by Emily Romano: two stanzas with  syllable count should 8/6/2.This is repeated twice for each stanza. The rhyme scheme is: a/b/c/a/b/c for each of the two stanzas.

10 comments:

  1. its like the best of both world...floating along the surface
    but still secure in the roots...

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  2. Love the words of tranquility ~

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  3. leafy steps to unseen doors...makes me wanna walk that path -ya know...

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  4. You've certainly conveyed the idea of tranquility.

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  5. I feel the tranquility ... nicely done!

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  6. Beautifully described. I love the watery floors and soft clouds sprinkling and flying under.

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  7. Exquisite images. So peaceful and serene.

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  8. Wonderful idea of the water floors--thanks. k. (manicddaily)

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  9. "white jewels on aqua garment" beautiful image...the whole poem is full of exquisite imagery.

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  10. Can feel the beauty of nature from your lines. Wonderful photo too:)

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