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A Place Under The Sun

The glowing light of star,
comforting us in the darkest hour,
a piece of God's heart,
looking upon this earth.

Rays of orange hue,
sparkle our life’s views,
pure golden light,
burns with God's might.

Central part of the universe,
giving strength to us,
glowing with God's blessings.

A place under the sun,
a place within God’s urn,
is safe for everyone.

30 comments:

  1. It is a very warm and safe place.

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  2. Wonderful color and luminescence captured in this spiritual piece.

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  3. the sun is a beautiful reminder of our provision...
    and that the light will find us even in the darkest night....

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  4. A place in the sun is always for the deserving! One has to work for it,yes!
    Well penned Vandana!

    Hank

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  5. very uplifting - like the sun, a symbol of hope

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  6. When the Sun is low and unobstructed, it looks godly for sure. I prefer the smiling god you've written about...

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  7. Sun, sky, wind and rain they are all part of the world that provide for us and feed us. We are foolish to think that we are important!

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  8. A safe and golden place for everyone - that is the very best of hopes for anyone.. :)

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  9. Oh, we all need to find our place in the sun!

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  10. Rays of orange hue,
    sparkle our life’s views,

    These are such beautiful lines :D Quite often the sun plays a huge role in providing us positive rays of hope which in turn lead to our happiness :D

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  11. Something to dream of, and be thankful for.

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  12. I like the way your poem encompasses so much of why we love the sun.

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  13. I enjoyed this poem in its entirety.

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  14. may the light be always with us; thanks for this celebration in poetry; thanks for dropping in at my Sunday Lime today Vandana

    much love...

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  15. Enjoyed reading the poem.. And second verse is simply amazing! :)

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  16. Very warm poem, like the subject :) Nicely written.

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  17. This piece has lovely rhymes and imagery. Beautiful!

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  18. beautiful and comforting thought.

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  19. Your word choices effectively give a warmth to this piece.

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  20. Beautiful use of color in this poem

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  21. I like the central part of the universe giving us strength..the sun does bring light and healing..

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  22. I love the sun, too, what a gift from God indeed!

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  23. What a lovely soulful poem....I loved thinking of the sun as 'a piece of god’s heart'!

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  24. Beautiful.... there is just us and God in honest encounter...:) Lovely poem, Vandana.

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  25. How beautiful to see the stars and the sun too as sparks ofmGod's love and light. This poem is comforting.

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  26. Great poem, love the idea of the sun being part of god's love.

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  27. This is deeply appreciated as I just moved to a new home and have sunlight streaming through many windows. Thank you,

    Elizabeth

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Thank you for flying by. I appreciate your honest and critical comments.