December 19, 2014

Your Quietness: Triversen

Your quietness,
holding many voices,
echoing through mind.

Your quietness,
words sealed within,
pouring melancholy.

Your quietness,
seeping in the mud,
drops of tears.

Your quietness,
deep in heart,
a pearl of the pacific.

Your quietness,
pondering about life,
beyond the boundaries.

Your quietness,
the winter snow,
falling on me softly.

Triversen : An entire poem consisting of 6 stanza and there is no particular rhyme scheme with it .The concept is to have a sentence with three phrases with each phrase a line. 

15 comments:

  1. So many facets of quietness...esp. love 'words sealed within,
    pouring melancholy.' x

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  2. Lovely..quiteness very well described...;-)

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  3. A wonderful form and beautiful poem. I would put this piece up there with some of your very best work, Vandana.

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  4. i have spent a bit more time in the quiet of late...and it is not a bad place to be...
    as long as you dont let it take you....

    the quiet of snow falling on you...ha...that is a nice touch....

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  5. Quietness can well hide spectacular talents that need be released given the proper provocation. Great poetic lines Vandana

    Hank

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  6. Oh, WOW. And I see how they accumulate into "winter snow." But there is so much beauty in there!

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  7. The silence has so many facets.. sometimes a bliss but often it could chill like winter winds.

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  8. Sometimes the quietness becomes an entity on its own, sometimes a comfort and at other times, a hindrance.

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  9. pearly, beautiful tears in the form of words...

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  10. I see a progression that I like here. The tone of the poem seems to be very sad, but the quietness seems to eventually bring some joy.

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  11. beautiful Vandana… quietness takes so many forms.

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  12. In the quietness, poetic thoughts take shape...I especially like the pearl in the Pacific :)

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Thank you for dropping in your precious pearls.......