December 7, 2014

My Spirit : Rhupunt

 
I bid adieu,
to azure blue,
I’ll remain true,
attached to you,
like a leafstalk.

Flying lone,
from this zone,
wading alone,
into unknown,
my spirit walks.


Rhupunt :  Welch form having three, four or more lines, of four syllables with a rhyming scheme a. a. a. B. / c. c. c. B. and so on. Last lines of each stanza rhyme…

8 comments:

  1. One can feel secure of the unknown by just following the heart. It'll work wonders! Great lines Vandana!

    Hank

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  2. Flying lone, from this zone,
    wading alone,into unknown,
    my spirit walks.

    Great lines Vandana...well matched with beautiful Image

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  3. Nice.

    Thanks of visiting.

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  4. Thank you for sharing this lovely rhupunt and illustration too.

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  5. Beautiful lines, Vandana. :)

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  6. Beautiful....great rhyming dear...very well written!!

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  7. i like the break lines at the end of each stanza...the rhymes make it sing but the breaks keep it from getting too sing songy...

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  8. A lovely flow with this form and delightfully written :)

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