November 30, 2014

What Hides In Her?

Her eyes,
hide tears,
waiting to spill out,
a flood of emotions.

In her heart,
hides a secret lover,
wishing to breathe out,
and care for her love.

Her palms,
hold a promise,
of happy endings,
kept safe for ages.

In her mind,
thoughts roam,
simple and complex,
yearning to fly free.

Let her out,
let her feel joy,
let her live life.


29 comments:

  1. smiles...i love the palms of promise...
    and it will take a special person to find that hidden lover
    in her heart...

    let her out indeed...

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  2. women are complex beings and you do a great job of showing that in this poem. Her heart, emotions, hope, mind, desire all radiate her...

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  3. how many tears, can the heart hold before it bursts out?? You have to let her out. Lovely read.

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  4. A woman repressed - a very timely and pertinent theme, Vandana.

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  5. Beautiful...beautiful...just beautiful....touched my ♥...very well written!!

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  6. This is beautiful and readers will interpret it many ways probably echoing the need and ability to live , love and replenish the earth.

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  7. True freedom certainly comes from the mind...a beautiful flowing poem...

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  8. This is so timely for woman's day.. Especially the last 3 lines... So strong wishes in that.

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  9. sweet tender touching. almost like the princess bride type

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  10. Lovely sentiments, particularly on International Women's Day!

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  11. I hope she finds a way to share what is in her heart!

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  12. Love the contrast. And the urgency of the message...

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  13. Happy Women's Day Vandana; a lovely poem of gestating freedoms

    i'm happy you dropped in at my Sunday Lime today

    much love...

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  14. A perfect ode for woman...Happy Women's Day!

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  15. "Let her out,
    let her feel joy,
    let her live life."...Amen to that! A perfect entry on a Woman's Day!

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  16. Yes! Let her out! Too many wait to take love in

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  17. I agree, let her live life! And what an interesting art image to accompany such a marvelous poem.

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  18. Yes, free her to the totality of joy....time is fleeting!

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  19. oh i do hope for her that she finds freedom in love and that those happy endings come through...

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  20. 'let her live life' ~ to freedom!

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  21. Yes I feel this poem so closely as I have kept her in for many years...so much joy when we do let her out to live life fully!

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  22. Ok, that picture is great, it makes me what to write her story. I think your poem goes perfectly with what the picture expresses. I am not sure if you wrote first or found the picture first, either way they compliment each other. Happy Woman's Day!

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  23. she will be free soon. the right one will come. lovely sentiments on each verse

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  24. Lovely depiction of the depths: eyes, heart, palms and mind.

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  25. A lovely flow of feelings needing to be expressed, experienced, and remembered.

    Happy Women's Day!

    Poppy

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  26. Yes, let her out! Everything becomes alive when you do let go :) Very nice writing, Vandana :)

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  27. Wonderful, a woman yearning for freedom! :)

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  28. Wonderfully penned Vandana.... a feeling of freedom and hope... :-)

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