29.11.14

A Woman’s Love

A woman’s love is……..
gentle autumn leaf,
when awake gives peace,
when falls gives nourishment.

A woman’s love is……..
glacial ice sheet on a lake,
when frozen insulates life,
when melts, life teems.

A woman’s love is……..
fragrant flowery zephyr,
flowing effortlessly,
breathing life in every atom.

A woman’s love is……..
zest of spring shower,
layering all the corners,
uplifting trodden souls.

24 comments:

  1. layering all the corners,
    uplifting trodden souls.

    Woman's love is easy to find but difficult to acquire. Those given as of their own free will are the ones most treasured. It certainly cannot be forced unto submission by the man. Great lines Vandana!

    Hank

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  2. This is lovely, the metaphor to go with each season. And the ice metaphor is so very original and fresh. Well done!

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  3. Ah, a woman's love has so many facets!

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  4. a womans love is the zest of spring...yes,
    and it colors the day and life of those around them...
    in a very good way...when you find the right one...

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  5. Wonderful nature images here. A lovely write.

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  6. This seasonal offering is so beautiful Vandana.

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  7. a woman's love is so special. it will stand the tests of all seasons

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  8. very lovely written and true

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  9. nice... a woman's love can be so much..so many different shades all through the seasons...breathing life in every atom.... i like

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  10. Vandana I savored every word here as it brought joy to my heart... to see how deep a woman's love is and how beautifully expressed.

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  11. Love - gentle leaf....love it

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  12. A woman's love is everything it needs to be... I love it! ♥

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  13. I like how you conveyed so much by playing with the seasons.

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  14. A woman's love can be all of those.. maybe it is needed to be flexible cause men's love tend to be less flexible.. * smile* wonderful use of repetitions here.

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  15. The world does not work without a woman's love.

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  16. I like how you likened a woman's love to elements of the seasons. My favorite is
    "glacial ice sheet on a lake,
    when frozen insulates life,
    when melts, life teems."

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  17. A beautiful description of a woman's love....I especially love thegentle autumn leaf metaphor. Fantastic!

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  18. There's many layers to a woman's love and you've captured so many very nicely!

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  19. Excellent. And I would suspect a woman's love is even stronger when met by another's love in return.

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  20. What a beautiful poem to celebrate a woman's love. You wrote some powerful lines here.

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  21. a woman's love has weathered all seasons..a beautiful poem..

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  22. i loved every single description of a woman's love you listed in your poem. i think it's all true.

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  23. So true... Woman's love poetically expressed!

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