24.7.14

I Will Never Abandon You

Within the tough walls of castle lives a broken soul,
loved by none and no one to applaud.

Weird ways of this world wither his heart,
harsh words pierce like dart.

Winter freeze is here forever,
dry emotions leave never.

Detested by others, he hides,
nobody to walk beside.

But, I know how gentle you are inside,
tender feelings deep in you reside.
An ocean of love you hold,
filled with purity of gold.

No matter what the world says,
you are here to stay.
Let me hold your hand,
to make a promise ,
that,
I will never abandon you.

8 comments:

  1. Let me hold your hand,
    to make a promise ,
    that,
    I will never abandon you.

    There is that feeling of obligation when 2 hearts are combined for the better good. Both would like to give more to the other. That is only being natural. Wonderful write Vandana

    Hank

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  2. I like the image you chose to go with your poem. Very good work with the rhyme as well!

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  3. What an amazing image. You had me at those five beautiful words! Lovely poem.

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  4. I wonderful fairytale-esque quality to this lovely poem - and to the image you selected, as well. The rhyme reinforces the timelessness of the piece and is well crafted. A delightful post, Vandana.

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  5. it can be hard to let someone in when the world has always been such a cold and cruel place. sometimes you need to be reminded that they see the real you, love the real you and would never let you go. this is a lovely declaration.

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  6. Sometimes the best of hearts are dressed in the shabbiest of coats. Beautifully penned. Reminded me of Beauty and the Beast.

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  7. how beautiful the love that endures...and lives despite what is said by others....
    because in that love there is something quite powerful...smiles....

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