06 April 2014

An Everlasting Love...............

Heaven or Earth,
You’ll only be mine in every birth.

Long before destinies were written,
your name in my heart was deeply hidden.
Whenever dark clouds surrounded me,
you became the shining sun with glee.
You held me when I tripped,
cared for me when my soul was ripped.
I always felt you in my arms,
healed under your soft warmth.
My dreams, my thoughts all coloured with you,
every word dipped in your hue.
Many lives we traversed,
you were the one whom I loved.

Like an ever expanding universe,
I’ll love you like an everlasting love………………………….....


  1. smiles...before time even began,
    their name hidden in your heart...
    what a beautiful love that is...

  2. the poem begins with a wonderful conviction connected with the faith of a race....beautifully written vandana....

  3. What a strong, beautiful declaration of love.

  4. "Long before destinies were written,your name in my heart was deeply hidden. " What a beautiful way to express love and so very beautifully written Vandana....smiles.

  5. Such a beautiful love story of destiny ~ Good to see you Vandana ~

  6. a lovely tribute to love..

  7. Declaration of love will beget a like response more in proportion to what is given. Love works in strange ways! Nicely Vandana!


  8. Appreciative intent and content.

  9. So romantic! 'my dreams my thoughts all coloured with you' what a wonderful
    phrase this is:)


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