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The Castle: A Rondelet


















The castle
Cloaked in snowy fur
The castle
Glistening under sun with razzle-dazzle
Guarded by knights of pine fir
Calmly waiting for her
The castle.

 Rondelet- Seven lines with rhyme scheme of AbAabbA.

13 comments:

  1. nice...i hope she finds her castle...i like the trees as knights....
    and i love castles...

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  2. Every fairy princess needs a castle.

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  3. I love pine trees as knights ... and castles are fascinating. Lovely rondelet :)

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  4. I agree with Brian. The tree knights - great image!

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  5. A fairytale scene caught in your words. :)

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  6. Buildings do wait for us. Beautiful capture.

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  7. I like snowy fur and pine-knights---- magic lines Vandana :)

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  8. That's a very pretty picture.

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  9. Oh how lovely… we do not live in a castle, but the fir trees are blanketed and sparkling with ice and snow all around our home!

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  10. I think I've visited that caste. I'm not familiar with the Rondelet, yours has intrigued me. I really must learn more.

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  11. Short and sweet with a new form. Nicely Vandana!

    Hank

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  12. Razzle-dazzle. I like the sound of that. I also think I might try my hand at the rondelet.

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  13. Great poem and what a lovely castle!

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