June 16, 2013

I Remember You

I remember you, when I walk through that door,
How every time you held me, not let fall.

I see your glimpse in every corner,
The way you loved me and enamoured.

I still feel your touch on my hands,
The soft dew of emotion left by your strands.

As the wind blows,
Brings your fragrance to the fore.


Can you hear my cries,
Heart wrenching devotions flowing for you.

Yes, I know that you do,
Your gestures and care say it all.

You’re entrenched in my soul deep within,
I remember you from end to beginning.


18 comments:

  1. Very romantic and sweet ... lovely memories :)

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  2. You’re entrenched in my soul deep within,
    I remember you from end to beginning.

    An ending so classic in its yearnings! Many can attest to its goodness, all those loving couples! Great write Vandana!

    Hank

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  3. mm the longing is palpable....the seeing them, hearing them even when they are not there...its magic...smiles.

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  4. Beautifully emotive, touches the soul :)

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  5. the memories feel vibrant and alive..sounds like a very special and close person to you..

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  6. This is beautiful and sad.
    "I remember you from end to beginning" - this ending line is perfect.

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  7. I get the feeling that something is lost even if it's not said directly... but I do love what the romance in your words

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  8. I like the turn in the second part, so sad and the longing is deep ~ Lovely ending too ~

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  9. What beautifully expressed feelings here!!

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  10. A love poem of deep devotion - wonderful to go deeper and cleaner than the salt sea. Thanks for participating. k.

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  11. From end to beginning is very positive! loved the softness in this piece

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  12. "I remember you from end to beginning". How poignant and sweet!

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  13. Wow...this is just lovely. Very nicely done.

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  14. loved the feeling as i read this..

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  15. Touching, very revealing of a heart...

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  16. I liked the starting line! Very nice!:)

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  17. This are really deep feelings...

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