August 25, 2012

I Can Feel You

Walking through soft snow,
Leaving behind the footprints,
In the river of my dreams I row.
I can feel you.

Going down the hill,
Leaving back the memories,
My desires have chilled.
I can feel you.

Wading through the water,
Leaving myself altogether,
For me only you matter.
I can feel you.





20 comments:

  1. Very romantic & beautiful poem.

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  2. ...ah, you made it so easy to feel the romance here... you have a gentle tone that has deep emotional impact... loved it! smiles...

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  3. Leaving back memories.....beautiful poem.

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  4. Very romantic with a hint of yearning perhaps. Nice, resonated with me.

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  5. Very romantic Vanadana! I enjoyed the sentiment as well as the form.

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  6. How intense, that, after leaving yourself, you can still feel another.

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  7. a beautiful flow of deep longing and emotion.......

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  8. Very lyrical. Well-penned. :-)
    -HA

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  9. smiles....def made me smile...the love is beautiful in this....
    written in a delicate touch....

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  10. I love the idea of rowing in the river of dreams!! Lovely writing.

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  11. Oh what a romantic you are.

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  12. Sweet and romantic write ~ Liking that refrain ~

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  13. wonderfully poetic, nostalgic...

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  14. oh how lovely. and such a nice rhythm to these lines. :<)

    www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com

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  15. Particularly like rowing in a river of dreams, and the soft gentle tone you used here,

    Elizabeth

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  16. It is wonderful when one has this strength of feeling...
    Anna :o]

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  17. Romantic and deep in emotions :) Lovely images.

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